Server talk:Darkmoon Faire Europe

Februari the 1st, 2009 overhaul

I spent a while to make this page (hopefully) better. During this overhaul I've done, amongst other, the following tasks:

• Structured the page
  To make the pace easier to read.
• Rewrote parts of the article
  The texts were a bit sloppy, so I tried to improve them. Since english is not my first language I ask others to check if my corrections are correct.
• Removed blatant promotion
  The text that used to be under Darkmoon Faire population (seen here for example) didn't have much to do with the Realm. So I removed it.
• Edited guildlists
  Guild-listing now structured from A to Z per faction, races are linked and cohesian in the structure.
• Moved all links to the bottom

Can some people please re-read the texts and correct them? Some bad-constructed sentences remain in the article, but I couldn't think of anything better. SyrionNL (talk) 07:20, 1 February 2009 (UTC)